Moment in time St Pius feast day.

Title: A happy moment for St Pius X

Draft 3

I saw the sweet, fancy cake with tasty sprinkles of powder

on top.

I heard cries of joy and people chomping there cake.

I felt Terrific  for Pope Pius X because it

was the feast day and proud to be at St Pius X.

I wondered if Pope Pius X was also celebrating

the feast day with us up in heaven.

Draft 2

I saw a marvellous cake with millimetres of powder on

top.

I heard mouthwatering kids.

I felt amazed and super for St Pius X.

I wondered if Pope Pius was eating cake with us.

Draft 1

I saw a nice spongy cake with tiny bits of powder.

I heard people eating their cake.

I felt happy and excited to eat my cake.

I wondered in Pope Pius was there.