Moment in time

Name: Opeti

Date: 24/7/18

Learning Goal:

We are learning TO USE OUR SENSES to describe what we think is happening in the photo.

We are learning to use WOW! words like adjectives and verbs to add impact for our audience (people who read our writing).

Title: The scariest way to school

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I heard splashing in the mucky water and wind blowing past my ears.

I saw the beautiful malachite mountains and the yellow beaked birds in the foggy sky.

I felt terrified, sick and excited at the same time.

I wondered if the other student in front of me felt the same.